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Demockracy (Life in The Diebold Dictatorship)

   Posted by moocowrat  Promoted 174 days 10 hours ago  1622 views  editorial  

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A short piece about the red, white, and blue. And it rhymes too!


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Flik, on 2/28/2008 2:02:28 AM
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What the hell is this?
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Fido, on 2/28/2008 2:02:31 AM
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Kinda Emo. I liked the verse though.
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moocowrat, on 2/28/2008 2:20:36 AM
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filk,
some would call it poetry. but it's more of an experiment than anything. seeing if the shoutwire crowd's who i think it is...
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finalflash, on 2/28/2008 2:28:50 AM
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Not bad. Not poetry, has no scheme, don't even think it qualifies as free verse.

But I get the point, shoulda said it in plain english, half the people won't get it now.
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moocowrat, on 2/28/2008 2:34:56 AM
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flash,
i don't even know what to classy my own work as.

and 94 views, 4 shouts. i'd say a bit more than half...
then again that was the point. hence the experiment.
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JudgeThreeWayDisciple, on 2/28/2008 2:47:33 AM
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Fabolous!
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seanboy, on 2/28/2008 2:59:50 AM
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i like it man well done moocowrat its even relavent over here in ireland with shell and our govt fuckin us over too and the general message in yer poem. shouted
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Slymind, on 2/28/2008 4:23:43 AM
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moral: build your own lifeboat
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wagermeiser, on 2/28/2008 4:37:23 AM
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I would have rather preferred it in Rant-style. Once I got past the first few lines it wasn't as lame as I thought. I was about to look away though mind you. Shouted for originality. Don't do it again though please.
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Surgery, on 2/28/2008 5:23:07 AM
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Didn't read it, poetry's for fags.
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